Dan is a wholesome man and I greatly appreciate that.
Dan是个挺厉害的人，我挺喜欢他的。

Edit: I should have added this to start with, but here's the link so you can watch the archived stream yourself
编辑：我本来应该在开始就加上这个的，但这里有个直播回放链接让你能自己去看看。（源文档里其实就没什么链接，但我还是必须有啥译啥）

 

Natsuki
夏树

"Natsuki so often gets the short end of the stick, no pun intended."
“夏树经常获得棒子的短边，没什么双关。”（夏树的贵物爹）

"You can tell she's in a really bad friend group."
“你能看出她交际圈里的那些朋友其实都是贵物。”

"She's an insecure person and people make fun of her hobbies and interests."
“她是一个没有安全感的人，人们都取笑她的爱好和兴趣。”

"She carries that personality into the club because that's what she knows."
“她把自己的个性带进文学部，因为这是她所熟知的。”

"Her meanness to other people probably stems from the meanness in the friend group."
“她对别人展现出的傲娇很有可能源于她那些贵物朋友的刻薄。”

"I'll Be Your Beach" shows how Natsuki really wants to be a positive force in someone's life.
《我会成为你的沙滩》体现了夏树其实有多么想给某人生活以正能量。

Dan still doesn't know how to pronounce Natsuki's name.
Dan仍然不知道Natsuki到底该怎么发音。（Nat'su'ki? or Na'tsu'ki?）

 

Yuri
优里

"Being abstract and metaphorical doesn't directly equate into being more skilled, even if that's what Yuri wants to believe."
“抽象和隐喻并不直接等于更高的写作水平，这也是优里想相信的。”

Yuri's "I've been reading a lot of horror lately..." line used to be "I've been reading a lot of Stephen King lately..." earlier in development.
优里说的“我最近读了很多恐怖小说……”在更早的开发中曾是“我最近读了很多斯蒂芬·金的小说……”

"The point of ['The Raccoon'] is that Yuri likes bread. Who doesn't like bread? Like Natsuki probably read it and was like 'Yah, I like bread, good job.' It's very relatable" - Dan joking
“《浣熊》的重点在于优里喜欢面包。谁不喜欢恰面包啊？就像夏树可能读了它，然后说‘耶，我喜欢面包，写的不错。’这挺有共鸣的” - Dan打趣说

Dan while talking about Yuri's beach poem: "It's like super edgy."
当Dan谈到优里的海滩诗时：“这可太潮啦。”

Yuri almost got Monika's black stockings.
优里差点就穿上了莫妮卡的嗨丝。（早期时，是优里穿黑丝而不是莫妮卡，但为了表现莫妮卡的特殊性才把黑丝给了莫妮卡）

 

Sayori
纱世里

(No direct quotes for this one because he said a lot.)
（这里没有直接的摘录，因为他说了一大堆。）

Sayori doesn't write her poems as any sort of "cry for help," instead she's writing them as an outlet for her feelings that she doesn't get anywhere else.
纱世里写诗时没抱着什么“呜呜快来救救我”的心态，相反，她写诗是为了释放她在其他任何地方都无法表达的情感。

Dan found the interactions between MC and Sayori most difficult to write because, unlike the others where MC is meeting them for the first time, he and Sayori have history already and he wanted to make sure that was clear. Also, while MC is mean to her, it's definitely not mean-spirited. He sees her as a friend and doesn't know how to change the dynamic in their friendship that they've had for so long.
Dan觉得MC和纱世里之间的互动是最难写的，因为，不像其他MC第一次认识的角色，他和纱世里早有关系，而且Dan想确保把它写明白了。此外，虽然MC对纱世里很屑，但绝对不是什么卑鄙小人。他把纱世里看作朋友，但不知道怎么改变他们维系已久的友谊的形态。

Sayori's first CG made Dan uncomfortable on stream.
直播中纱世里的第一张CG让Dan觉得不太舒服。（系扣子）

 

Monika
莫妮卡

The point where Monika starts messing with the game is probably around the day when Sayori comes to the club feeling down. She realizes that if she does nothing the player will just continue to get closer to one of the other girls. Also, her whole "interrupting at the worst moments" thing is very intentional and something that Dan found quite amusing to write.
莫妮卡大概是从纱世里低落地来到社团的那天开始搅乱游戏。她意识到如果她不干点什么的话玩家只会继续攻略某个女孩。此外，她各种“在最糟时插手”的行动都非常的故意，Dan觉得这样写很有意思。

"Monika's writing tip of the day" was something Dan came up with initially for the sole purpose of setting up the line "the ink flows down into a dark puddle" in "Your Reality."
Dan起初想出的“莫妮卡的每日写作小技巧”的唯一目的只是在《Your Reality》中安排一句“the ink flows down into a dark puddle”。

When you close the game, "It's basically like she's dying or her universe is dying and being replaced with random noise." (Moral: never close DDLC.)
当你关闭游戏时，“基本上就像她正死去，或者说她的宇宙将凋亡并被喧闹的杂音所取代。”（启示：永远不要关闭DDLC。）

"She's a fairly normal person, aside from destroying the world."
“她是个相当正常的人，除了毁灭世界外。”

 

Poems
诗

Dan felt bad for giving Natsuki such a simple-sounding poem on the first day in "Eagles Can Fly."
对于在第一天给夏树《雄鹰能飞翔》这样一首低龄诗，Dan感到很难过。

"Bottles" is one of his favorites.
“瓶子”是他最爱的诗之一。

It's official boys(*says?*), "Amy Likes Spiders" is not about Yuri, nor does any person named Amy actually exist. It is about Natsuki being judged for her interests and how stupid she finds that.
官方声称，《艾米爱蜘蛛》和优里并没有关系，也没有哪个叫艾米的人真的存在。这只是关于夏树因她的兴趣而被评判，以及她觉得这有多蠢罢了。

 

Other
其他

The "Help me, Sayori!!" option in the argument between Natsuki and Yuri is now officially a scummy choice. Paraphrasing what Dan said, It involves Sayori unnecessarily and MC simply shifts the burden of fixing the situation onto Sayori.
夏树和优里争吵时的“帮帮我，纱世里！！”的选项现在正式成为了屑。套用Dan的话说，这个选项把纱世里无关地牵扯了进来，MC只是把解决现状的责任甩到了纱世里身上。

The Dokis each have memories of their lives up until the point of the club, but of course they're all false because they only started to exist at the beginning of the game.
文学部的女孩子们拥有在入部前生活的记忆，但当然它们都是假的，因为她们只是在游戏开始才开始存在的。

Everyone picked Sayori in the strawpolls so that they could "give her the love she deserves before we have to say goodbye." (-Dan) Yuri came second and Natsuki last (oof).
在直播前的投票中每个人都选择了纱世里，这样他们就可以“在我们不得不说再见之前，给她应得的爱。”（-Dan）Yuri获得第二名，而Natsuki获得最后一名（啊噢）。

The game is written to sound like it was translated from Japanese.
游戏名是故意起的听起来像从日语翻译过来的。

"I don't imagine MC as a character the same way I imagine the others. He's just a blank slate who says whatever's convenient."
“我并不像看其他人一样把MC当成一个角色。他只是个工具人罢了，你随便说什么都行。”

"There's so much spaghetti in DDLC's code."
“DDLC的源码里有太多的意面了。”（意面式代码指写的像一盘面条一样乱糟糟，缺乏给人读的结构和难以维护的源代码）

"Why the heck are people saying the DK rap in chat?"
“为啥大家都在聊天里刷DK rap？”

"I'm 5'3", I'm a tiny little man."
“我身高5英尺3英寸（约一米六），只是个小矮人。”